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It's 5 AM,
Not a shadow of a sound
It's 5 AM,
Not a soul around
Quiet but comforting,
One might say,
Quiet but sad,
The sky so cold and grey.
Quiet and relaxing,
But if time holds true,
Some time around now,
Dawn will break through.

Whats that?

A noise becomes a sound...
A sound becomes two...
Two sounds becomes three...
Dawn has broken through.

It's the morning now,
You can see the dew on the leaves
You can hear all the sounds,
The cars, the buses, the police
The birds off in the distance,
on the cold grey sky,
If you were here,
You'd nearly cry

It was 5 AM
There wasn't a shadow of a sound.
It was 5 AM
There wasn't a soul around.

Damn it was relaxing, that 5 AM.
It was fun while it lasted, that 5 AM.
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i wrote it this morning, at 5 am. enjoy.

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:icontia404:
This is really good. It has a nice flow to it. Great job, hope to see more poems from you. :) :+fav:

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thanks man. it means a lot to me. it's probably my favorite poem by myself.

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The world is such an ugly place
A mother locked her son inside a Cuban Hotel
And then she released an army of butterflies into the room
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:icontia404:
No problem at all. :)

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:icondancexaway:
I really like this, especially the last stanza it completes the poem so well =]

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No smile is more beautiful as one that Has struggled through tears
:iconsir-suicide:
thanks, i worked really fucking hard on it, for an hour. looking back on it now, in that superpacked hour, i got a lot done.

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The world is such an ugly place
A mother locked her son inside a Cuban Hotel
And then she released an army of butterflies into the room
-FLCL Issue 2-
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seriously thats pretty fuckin good..
*pokes

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cky = world
music = universe..

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